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• Where the animals should go...

  (#) Broken_Feathers 2011-06-04

  i LOVE it u NEED to update SOON!!! :D

  Author's response

  thanks!!!!! :)
  
  im trying as hard as I can to update regularly, school work is just getting in the way XD

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) fueledbyPanic 2011-06-04

  Hey I just found this story and I love it. And you have to update soon!

  Author's response

  thanks!!!I'm trying really hard to update asap, school is just a bit hectic at the moment...

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) CosmicZombie 2011-06-05

  I LOVE this! it's so great...has to be one of my fave stories on here! :D please please please update SOOOOOOOON! xD i'm gunna go rate this now ^^
  
  CosmicZombie xo
  
  p.s. thank you so much for mentioning "Be My Detonator" in your note...really made me smile- so glad you like it! I've actually just posted the new chapter now :)

  Author's response

  Thank you soo much! you have no idea how much this made my day!!

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) MCRmy101 2011-06-09

  Update sooooon? Please????

  Author's response

  i'll try :)

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) comatosejoyx 2011-06-13

  I thought Frank had already came out to his parents and that's why his dad was calling him a fag all the time and stuff.
  Also, which sort of therapy session lasts like a minute? And then, after asking 2 questions, they just tell you to come back tomorrow,no time or anything, just assuming you have nothing else to do. Therapists can't talk about other patients either so he wouldn't have been able to say he knew Gerard. It's ridiculously unrealistic.
  You need to watch out for your punctuation too. I've seen sentences started without capital letters, commas where there don't need to be and no comma where there should be one.
  I am enjoying the storyline though. Those things just bothered me.

  Author's response

  thanks for reviewing :)
  Sorry about the whole Frank/parents situation, I guess it is a bit unclear. He's more or less bi, but he never really considered a 'real' relationship with another guy (I'll try and clear that up later). Also, about the therapy thing, I do go to therapist/psycologist, and I have had times where sessions had to be cut short for certain reasons...And have been asked to come back some other time. And I also have been told, not of patient's condtitions (of course) but that said therapist knew someone. In the story, the therapists never mentions he knows Gerard from his practice, it could just be from anywhere.
  About the punctuation, I'll try and be extra careful (I've always had some trouble with that... :S), but thanks for pointing that out. I'll try my best to reduce the number of errors :)

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) TheBambooMuncher 2011-06-13

  Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! I love this story!
  
  It's not completely original, but it's still fantabulous :D
  
  I'd love to see Frank meet Mikey...but it's up to you :3
  
  L.O.V.E eeeeeet -End Transmission-

  Author's response

  haha thanks!!!
  Yeah Mikey and Frank are gonna meet.
  I was hoping the stuttering thing would help make it a little more orginal, but I didn't wanna steer too far away from that whole type of story because I love them XD. (I got the idea for the stutter when our music teacher told us a story of this famous singer from the 60s (I won't say anymore in fear of ruining possible story lines XD)). 'nyways, that was a long reply :P. Thanks for reviewing, means a lot :D

• Where the animals should go...

  (#) CosmicZombie 2012-08-26

  Okay, so I can see I reviewed this months ago, but like I said, I'm gunna review every chapter again as I read this :3 I loved it. The way you wrote the tentative friendship beginning between Frank and Gerard was very real and sweet, and really, I'm just in love with the characters. It may be a story that's done quite often (high school frerard), but you have the talent to pull it off and make it original and interesting.
  
  I like the way you haven't overdone Gerard's stutter or made it puncture the flow of the story too, and your descriptions really draw me into the little world of Frank and Gerard.
  
  I'm sorry it's taken me such a while to read this, I'll be quicker next time, I promise. Thank you very muchly for your last email, I shall be replying to it really soon :D
  
  Oh, and 'I Caught Fire'? I fucking love that song XD
  
  Lucy xo

  Author's response

  Wow, thank you so much! Your support means a lot. Really. :)
  Can't wait for your email!
  xx, a.

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