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Snape's Undying Love for Lily

by lilyqueen777 2 Reviews

There's a cry deep in the night, coming from the dungeons. Who is it? None other than Snape crying. But why? A letter here explains all. Please rr! [One-shot]

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst, Romance - Characters: Harry, James, Lily, Snape - Published: 2006/05/25 - Updated: 2006/05/25 - 454 words - Complete

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  • Snape's Undying Love for Lily

    (#) uppsydaisy 2006-05-27 05:22:46 AM

    Story has great potential but is a little confusing. You need a beta reader to polish it to perfection so that the reader can see the story the same way you do.
  • Snape's Undying Love for Lily

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-08-05 05:14:52 PM

    Maybe this would get rated back up if you tweaked the exaggerated sap and OOC a little more. Then it would fall more clearly into the parody category. It's high, but it's not making it over the top, so I'm not laughing.

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