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Stockholm Syndrome
(#) FuckMeSideways 2011-04-28
Fantastic as usual. I like the fact that we're meeting the source of Frank's issues. What I miss, however, is seeing the other four boys regularly. I definitely think you should bring them back in at least for a small cameo.
Another note, that was not long at all. x) In fact, (please note that I already enjoy this story immensely) if it were longer I'd probably enjoy it that much more. x)
As usual, good writing on your part. You're one of the few authors around that can keep me interested for this long.
Can't wait for the next chapter.Stockholm Syndrome
(#) shortygirl 2011-04-28
He used her name her real name....It's hard for me to imagine this over. He got all dressed up for that...a party frank didn't even want to go to or it seemed that way
update soonStockholm Syndrome
(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-04-28
And long-ass review mode: ON!
HOLY SHIT MAN! Oh, wait, that's improper. My, wasn't that just... Shocking. There were two Frank's, both of which are known to the My Chemical Romance fans, and yet, both were so very different. Frank was at least a little kind, and is actually beginning to like Paulina, whilst Frank, Sr., is being melocholy and aloof, still dislking his son, despite the fact that he doesn't even look like himself, all for his father. I do, indeed, find it quite interesting that Frank took Paulina to his parents' house to meet his parents and become somewhat aquainted with each other. He could have just left Paulina at the house with Gerard, Michael, Ray, and Robert. I am assuming, though, that he actually wanted her there, almost to take the bite off of seeing the parents.
Okay, okay, that was somewhat pathetic. But you have to admit, very... POSH. Now, back to normal, down-to-earth mode. That was fuckin' amazing, despite the 2k words. Nope, didn't need a coffee break in this, I just breezed through. You may think it long, but that's probably only because of the amount of conversation. The length was perfect, nothing to worry about.
And OMG OLIVIA! Lol, it was funny when Paulina totally made Frank her drunken bitch by kissing him in front of her, in public, AND with his parents around somewhere. Olivia did seem like a very light-headed girl... And what was I going to say... it was something... about... that's it, I'm guessing. Hope this isn't cut off!
Update soon!Stockholm Syndrome
(#) Paramour 2011-04-28
That's a hell of a lot of alcohol. 0.0 I fear for his liver slash blood/alcohol ratio.
No coffee break needed. My best friend once wrote a ten thousand word chapter; four of them, actually, and had enough left over for a sequel. This? Pah. Like reading Mrs. Piggle Wiggle after War and Peace. Which isn't to say that it's unintelligent, because it's not. It's the length difference. My analogies suck.
Anywho. Something wicked this way comes, I can feel it. I'm just not sure what it is yet. I expect one hell of an ending out of you, though. No pressure. xD
-AllieStockholm Syndrome
(#) perfectzombie 2011-04-29
JATHLSKAG that was AMAZING and it wasnt long at all, in fact, you should make them longer! :D omg it was just amazing and paulina has a crush on Frankieee ;) UPDATE SOON D:Stockholm Syndrome
(#) scarlett_fitch2027 2011-04-29
That was not long.
But fantastic as always. Truly. I just...how do you write so well? And Frank, I'm starting to really feel sorry for him, even like him. But anyway, update soon. Please. I have to find out what happens with him and Paulina. I'm serious. It's a need.
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(#) andreajp 2011-04-29
hell you can write a 10000 word chapter and it wouldnt be long enough, i am torn because i cant wait to see how the story is going to end, but then i dont want it to!Stockholm Syndrome
(#) tiffygurl 2011-05-01
wow! THIS has got to be one of my favorite chapters! i have no idea how you come up with thisStockholm Syndrome
(#) TheShadowFantasy 2011-05-02
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYY A WHOLE CHAPTER! it wasn't too long it was great! Writing was pretty fantastic as well. Love this story keep up the good work! :] Thanks for updating!
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