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Loss of Huamnity

'Wear regret skin tight, dear 'master'. Hojo is a sadistic bastard, and Vincent gets enough material for nightmares for years to come. Just where did Chaos come from, anyway? Pre-game.

Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: R - Genres: Angst, Horror - Characters: Hojo, Sephiroth, Vincent Valentine - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2006/05/17 - Updated: 2006/05/17 - 1918 words - Complete

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• Loss of Huamnity

  (#) ReaperRain 2007-07-28 01:30:53 PM

  Hm, it was pretty good, but there were a few typos here and there, such as:
  'That is a question to ask the dear profession Crescent of yours'
  'blood blossoming on blue and white i>I'm bleeding'
  Plus, the bits where you had long paragraphs of inner thought were pretty good, really showed the confusion and even insanity - but they were also kinda difficult to read. Consider splitting them up with different font variations (like bold and italics - you did it a bit, but not enough, I felt) or dashes to make them easier on the eye. But overall, excellent; I'd like to see more of this.

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