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Past and Present Fleeting Together
3 ReviewsIf Inuyasha is a demon, then shouldn't he still be alive in Kagome's time? Or did he die before her? InuKag [Lemons to come][CURRENTLY ON HIATUS]!
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Past and Present Fleeting Together
(#) darkener14 2006-04-28 10:51:28 AM
It's a very good chapter, but I suggest going over spelling a little, such as nonchalantly.
Keep the story going though! -
Past and Present Fleeting Together
(#) InuKag 2006-05-05 05:52:37 PM
Spelling and grammer are of some issue, but its a good chapter, i just can't seem to figure out where you are planning to go with it.. there is no real plot. I suggest maybe making the chapters a bit longer and getting a bit more information within the first few. -
Past and Present Fleeting Together
(#) megan dougherty 2006-10-15 08:22:33 PM
i liked it i think you should keep going and finish this story