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• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) wedge12 2010-04-16

  Great story, and a good update. I look forward to learning more about the steam world.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) Cateagle 2010-04-16

  'Tis a good update and I like the changes you've made. I particularly enjoy the compare and contrast between the steam world and Hermione's home worldline. It's going to be interesting to see if she can return and what she'll bring with her. It looks like Harry's getting quite ready for some serious action to start bringing the British wixarding world back to order and methinks Albus is not going to appreciate the lessoning any more than Tom will.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) Maddog 2010-04-16

  Just found this story. You have a good solid piece of writing here. Can'nt wait to read more, I hope you have people getting what they truly deserve.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) dhampirkinfolk 2010-04-16

  I tried to read the first version of this, and had to stop after about three paragraphs because it was so poorly written. Then I saw that you'd 'rewritten' it so I thought I'd give it another shot. I really wish I hadn't wasted my time. You took a completely illiterate piece of garbage, and turned it into a much longer, very boring piece of barely legible garbage. My ten year old writes better than this.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) axelrajr 2010-04-20

  its been a lot of fun. very good job with the overhaul.
  
  im looking forward to the point where you get into new material though.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) Destroyerdrt 2010-04-22

  This is still a great story. I would love to see the Wild Hunt used in more stories.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) GinnyLuvr 2010-04-25

  Glad to see the story continue.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) animemonster 2010-05-04

  I like the plot of the story, it's original and interesting. However, I will say that you need to get a beta reader. You have a lot of grammatical and spelling mistakes that tripped me up while reading.
  
  I enjoy Hellsing crossovers, so I'm glad to see it (in fact that's why I read it).
  
  I'm eager to see some death eaters taken down.

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) cr0cket 2010-05-27

  am not into steam punk but have heard of it so decided to read your story was glad i did. Hope it continues
  

• Portals, Steam and Magic

  (#) Qellar 2012-05-21

  Been looking for this story, love the revision. But noticed last update was 2010 and this being 2012 going to assumed fic is dead and abandon.... Shame that it seems to be current trend to see very good fics become dead and abandon...

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