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• Player

  (#) Cateagle 2009-11-29

  Some good smut and a nice touch of humor; a fun chapter to read. Methinks Dumble's patsies (Ron adn Hermione) are not going to enjoy this summer if Harry won't write them and this forces Dumbles to not bother further with them. It's definitely going to be a very interesting summer fo rall involved, including hte party who isn't in Amsterdam.

• Player

  (#) zicou 2009-11-30

  This story is great, but, you really need a Beta, in the chap. 1 for example i don't know how many times you wrote "know" instead of "no" and "no" instead of "know" ....
  
  I hope to read more soon so...
  Continuuuuuuue,
  Z.

• Player

  (#) red_jacobson 2009-11-30

  fun chapter, but, can you please fix the formatting? The large blocks of text make it really difficult to read.
  
  thanks
  
  red

• Player

  (#) Goodygurl 2009-12-11

  It would be funny to have Ginny get another pair wet and send them to Harry, lol. But anyway...nice Harry gets back at the world story. I really would like to read more. Update soon.

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