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Broken

by Cedadidion 1 Reviews

the horric tale of innocence destroyed and a girl forced down a dark path of blood and death.

Category: Fantasy - Rating: R - Genres: Fantasy,Horror,Romance - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] [R] - Published: 2009/10/14 - Updated: 2009/10/14 - 2108 words

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  • Broken

    (#) theheadlessauthor 2009-10-18 10:42:16 AM

    What I would suggest is get someone else to look over it for you. You have some editing issues that need to be fixed. Otherwise, keep writing! :D Hope I helped a little.

    Author's response

    thank you very much. i'll see what i can do. :)

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