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Dual Reality

The darkness was a comfort. [Freya/Chii]

Category: Chobits - Rating: G - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2006/04/05 - Updated: 2006/04/05 - 184 words - Complete

Reviews

• Dual Reality

  (#) _Sakura_ 2006-11-17 03:17:12 AM

  This is a pity it wasn't longer, i enjoyed reading it considering it took me less than 30 secondes to finish. :P

• Dual Reality

  (#) Gabi_Texi 2007-01-01 05:42:18 PM

  Well, it does sound emotional. Very good character research. However, it's too short, man. Aren't you gonna do anything about it? Maybe rework it? Anyway, if this is based on your friend's work (unintentionally), tell him it's not half bad, but that he should try other things besides drabbles (I think they limit a person's imagination... and aren't really that good).
  
  Anyway, God bless ya soul,
  Gabi Texi

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