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Personal Object

Doctor Ashley Kafka is the director of a maximum security psychiatric institute. She has a problem: Cletus Kasady, known as Carnage, a mass-murderor with super-powers. He hasn't escaped his ce...

Category: Spider-Man - Rating: R - Genres: Sci-fi - Characters:  - Published: 2005/04/07 - Updated: 2005/04/07 - 6093 words - Complete

Reviews

• Personal Object

  (#) PikaBot 2006-05-17 04:50:19 PM

  I really liked this. It was gripping right from the beginning, and portrayed Carnage just right. There's only two ways to write Carnage, and this is the good one. That first line of dialogue("It's Miller's tooth. His goddamn tooth") sounded like it came right out of a Stephen King story; it wouldn't surprise me in the least to discover you read a bunch of that while writing this.
  
  The exchanges between Kasady and Kafka were lengthy, but entertaining. You've got quite a talent for writing dialogue. I'd like to especially commend you on your use of curse word with Kasady. Rather than dropping them randomly through the dialogue, you applied them in just the right places to produce the maximum impact.
  
  Overall, well written and well conceived. Hope you write more!

• Personal Object

  (#) Idhren 2006-07-20 08:03:27 PM

  Interesting spin on Carnage, with a nice ending zing. I haven't seen any more of Spider-man than the movies and the occassional fanfic, but I followed the storyline just fine.

• Personal Object

  (#) ghostwalker 2007-04-01 08:38:48 AM

  I don't know a lot about Carnage but this suits what I know of Kasidy's personality. Wiked writing, I'd be interested in reading more.

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