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• The Dark Light Within

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-08

  Nice fic and glad I found it. Personally, I like the idea of H/D/T myself, and would look forward to where you go with this, and how you might have Harry get around Dumbledore's control, and maybe Hilda could be a help in that?

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) AlexiDrake 2008-12-08

  Great story so far. And personally I would like the idea of Harry/Daphnee/Tracy/Tonks but that is just me.
  
  Alexi

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) biged78 2008-12-08

  Your story is coming along well. Either pairing would be okay.

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) Vanir 2008-12-08

  Clichéd? Yes it is, but clichés are concepts that are so good that they've been used over and over. I've read a story where Harry became champion of the Dark and turned into a Dark Elf. It had it's moments but was never finished. If we could all make up our own inventive storylines, we wouldn't be doing fanfiction, would we? I do like this outset. You've gathered an interesting ensemble, including the milf mommy, and i do look forward to some hardcore Dumbledore-bashing. Keep it up. I'm sticking around. If you ever need ideas or such, I'm reachable through my profile. My writer's block only covers my own story.
  
  Vanir

  Author's response

  Thanks for the offer. I am glad you don't mind cliched story-lines because I've read quite a few FanFics and most of my ideas will come from at least one I've read. I probably won't have much original stuff in any stories I write.
  
  Concealed-Convict

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) MoonFang 2008-12-08

  Great Story so far. Keep up the good work.
  
  I think it would be a good H/D/T (maybe some Ron/Ginny bashing when Ron hates him for dating not one but 2 sexy girls and the fact that they are both snakes. And ginnys pissed cause shes not with him. Herms could be up to you).
  
  Anyway, hope the next chapter is up soon
  
  M.

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) lysander 2008-12-09

  have herms look in on him too when tonks sees him and wants to help

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) proace19 2008-12-09

  great story cant wait for more. i would say Harry/Daphne/Tracey

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2008-12-09

  Great story.
  
  I would like to see:
  
  Harry/Daphne/Tracey/Tonks

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) DJ32 2008-12-09

  Nice work I look forward to seeing ware you take it.

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) anakhuskerfan 2008-12-09

  Great story so far, can't wait to read more. I hope it is a Harry/Daphne/Tracey/Tonks

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