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The Dark Light Within
5 reviewsThe Potter line has some family secrets and on the eve of Harry's sixteenth birthday he gets a visit from a long dead relative who reveals some. I don't own Harry Potter.
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The Dark Light Within
(#) Cateagle 2008-12-02
Well, now, that's quite an attention-catching start to your story. It read well, too, and I'll be looking forward to further chapters. I do wonder how Dumbles is going to take Harry's disappearance and the much-changed Harry he'll encounter in September? Too, I suspect a summer together for Harry and Daphne could put a glitch in a number of folks' plans.
Bravo!! for an excellent start.The Dark Light Within
(#) yoyo888 2008-12-03
It looks good so far. I'm not too sure about the blue skin thing but i like the idea of Daphne. I hope she stays in the story as a pairing between her and Harry, maybe??
I look forward to the next chapterThe Dark Light Within
(#) Vanir 2008-12-03
Hmm. Anything with Dark Elves are usually a big nono for me, but this looks interesting. This piece read well, and i sense an underlying potential for funny situations. Pleease don't make him blue! Smurfs don't make good heroes. the red eyes on the other hand... Just imagine Dumbles first reaction. And Ginnys. On the other hand, let many bad things happen to Ginny.
Keep at it. I can tell that this is where the fun starts. Wouldn't it be great if S:t Mungo's had a cure? Developed recently by a muggleborn? Heh.
Thanks.
VanirThe Dark Light Within
(#) Bronze 2015-11-09
Good story so far but of course you know that Dumbledork isn't going to believe that Harry needed rescuing from his, quote " LOVING " family, unquote. There's just no way that Dumbledork will ALLOW anyone to know that Harrys' relatives hate and abuse him. It'd look so bad for him if one or more of the Order of the Chared Chicken should actually disobey him and upon hearing Vernon shouting at Harry enter to see firsthand what Vernon does to Harry. I do wonder how they'd react if challenged by Harry to be in the house when he got there invisibly to witness Vernon beating Harry? Might change a few minds about just how wise the old goat molester truly was.
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