by arquero333
3 Reviews
Category: Fall Out Boy -
Rating: PG - Genres: Fantasy,Horror,Romance - Characters: -
Published: 2008/08/20 - Updated: 2008/08/20 - 1086 words
Reviews
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That was an amazing chapter, although I can see William's lie about Pete being dead coming back and biting him on the ass...
I have been reviewing, but obviously FicWad hates my reviews once more... oh well
I do have something that bothered me with that chapter - You posted an authors note in the middle of the text. Now it gets a little annoying when the story is interrupted by something as trivial as "I love that line" or whatever... you can post notes like that at the end of the chapter.
Sorry if that brought you down a little
Update soon
xox Emmi
Author's response
Thanks for pointing that out. I didn't mean to put it there. I explained what happened in the chapter if you want to know why.
And don't worry, it didn't bring me down. I was honestly just happy to know whats been going on with the reviews =]
arquero333
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(#) xoconverse 2008-08-21 07:02:08 PM
agreeing with RyanRossLuver, it was an amazing chapter and i can definitely see William's lie about Pete biting him in the ass.
great chapter.
update soon please! :]
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(#) xoconverse 2008-08-29 05:03:12 PM
oh yeah, and, big fan of Princess Bride! hahaha i love it:] and this story:]