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Drabble Angst

Tragic news reach Rivendell. Impending doom looms at the gates. What news does Glorfindel bring to Elrond? OOC

Category: Lord of the Rings - Rating: G - Genres: Humor - Characters: Elrond, Other - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2006/03/02 - Updated: 2006/03/02 - 233 words - Complete

Reviews

• Drabble Angst

  (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-19 05:28:45 PM

  This would be easier to read if you fixed the formatting so that the paragraphs don't run together. A carriage return usually does the trick.

• Drabble Angst

  (#) Rous 2006-03-20 05:46:11 PM

  Formatting would improve the reading of this piece. However, my main issue is with characterization. I once wrote a story that I thought was very humorous and cute. It was quickly cut down because (and I now know this to be true) my characters were very OOC. I have since then paid very close attention to such things in my writing.
  
  On the other hand, if you like this kind of thing, and you have enough followers, I would suggest a warning of A/U and OOC up front, then no one can complain.
  
  For the most part, this was not a bad story. Thank you for sharing.

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