Excellent chapter, Taure. Held my attention very well, and has me even MORE interested in the story than I was before ;)
I actually have no complaints whatsoever... I can't wait to see Harry's return, I love this OC that you've invented, and I'm a little wary as to what'll happen to Oliver. They way you're introducing his character to us, bit by bit, it's making me think that he's going to get offed pretty soon :D
Great work, and good luck writing more.