One of the things I like about Fan Fiction is the differing interpretations of how the individuals could develop. You have really changed some individuals. That said the only one I have trouble wrapping my mind around is the change in Lucius. That one aside I find this story one to stretch my mind with, it's well written and the characters have stayed true, chapter to chapter, to the way you've written them. Congratulations.
Author's response
Thanks very much! I'm having so much fun writing this...and the feedback is great! I'm actually a bit stunned at some of the positive feedback I'm getting from both websites I'm archived at. This was just something to do to pass the time...