I had a good laugh from reading Voldemort's interaction with Dolores. Your take on Voldemort is one of the most original I have ever seen. He is a refreshingly evil dark lord - not the tired old `kill it, kill it! Crucio!' that is so endemic to the most of HP fanfic. Also, Neville is turning into a superb schemer, it seems. I will wait to see what Neville does with his plants next. A pity both Snape and Bellatrix are gone - it would be amusing to see Neville strangle Bella with the Devil's snare.
Keep on writing. This was an excellent chapter.
Regards,
Maidros
Author's response
Thank you for the coments and my apologies for my slow response. Voldemort should be a villain that people can believe. As for Neville stay tuned...~Jim