So here I am, still reviewing a story that is already completed. I am a loser.
There were so many things in this chapter that made me laugh out loud! Seriously: "I blushed. To distract myself I looked out the window. Then I glanced in the rear view mirror again and caught Patrick´s eyes looking at me. He blushed too. Now, if this wasn´t the official dorks-mobile, I don´t know." I could really see this happening. And I love dorks, so protraying the characters in this way makes me love all of them even more!
Okay, I'm going to go read some more now...