Nice job on this though I would give Harry and Daphne some more quality (not necessarily sexual) time. They are spending a lot of time socializing or with the ritual lately so the sense of their emotional commitment to each other isn't necessarily growing. Other than this you're doing a great job and I will, as always, look forward to future installments.
Author's response
Thank you for your thoughtful comments. I will try to make sure they get some couple time "on camera" as it were. They are pretty busy people at the moment but I can probably fit some in while they are shopping.