Nice chapter and good to see you're producing on this story. One of the things that you may wish to do at some point is to go back to earlier chapters and more clearly state when Harry and Daphne moved from uncomfortably bound to, particularly, boyfriend/girlfriend as you seem to have them over the last few chapters.
Thanks as always for your hard work on this story, looking forward to future installments.
Author's response
It was in Chapter Seven that Harry first asked her out. They've been a couple since then more or less.
Thank you for commenting! I will see if I can make that transition stand out more.