Review for The Ritual

The Ritual

(#) dragyn 2013-08-28

Only b/c you've made the error several times now: the language is Parseltongue, one who speaks it is a Parselmouth. Thus, Harry and Ginny are Parselmouths, not Parseltongues.

Author's response

Thank you for the comment!
I'll try to fix that.

Ok, I think I've fixed all the instances of that across all four chapters. If you spot any I've missed let me know where.