Review for Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

Harry Potter and the Next Overlord

(#) ralphmullins 2013-06-15

I love your story so far. I like how you gave the sword abilites and I wounder if the serpent sommen spell with the sword and it would turn the sword in to a snake that Harry could cammand to do things not to nechin talk to. I was also wondering if you are going to give a animagus form or not. One more thing is are you going to make Flure/her sister/Andramada/Belltrix/Tonx/Narcica/Hermione/her mother in to a mistress/wife/slave?