okay, let me start out by saying i am not a fan of the one shot. i had this conversation with Alex, and my argument was that it doesn’t give enough time for character development, and I always seem to think you can expand on it and make it into a full story…
but i am in love with this.
which is the cue for an itemized list...
1.) the title of this story... "One Shot". how fucking perfect. "end of".
2.) the way you have harry and patrick interacting through the store made me swoon. i could visualize Patrick reaching for the macaroni.
3.) per our IM convo, i just thought i'd count this out for ya. (a)son of a bitch up (b)SHITzu (c) Now who was the bitch?
4.) "completely /stumped/." damn you and your ability to be clever. i smiled.
5.)choice quotable- "he smiled celestially. Oh if cherubs were human, they'd worship him." - this one sentence sums up how she feels for him. it's perfect.
6.) the plot blew me away. i did not see that coming. from the first "nobody move" i was reading as quickly as i could, and i thought my eyeballs were going to explode from the exercise.
7.) "Everything hopeful ended with one shot." - conclusions don't come any better than that. pure fucking genius.
("O) times infinity.
Author's response
Technically, I didn't swear once....haha! So glad you enjoyed it, you know how nervous I was about it! I love you guys way too much, it's bordering on fornication.