By the second paragraph I was thinking that this reminded me of that great series called. "The Hitchhikers guide to the Galaxy" Yup I read it, well some of it saw the T.V. series mostly. Anyway back to the review.
This Style of story telling is differnt to read. But once used to it is quite acceptable. As of now what it has going for it the most is it's discriptive style. The author paints a good picture that the reader can interpet. However the story is not exciting or real funny as of yet. Just intresting with a attempt at being funny. In all honesty discriptions of funny looking characters can only get you so far. But the start of an adventure leaves many possiblities.