This chapter was so good! I really like how you make Gerard's point of view seem totally different from Frank's, style and character wise- and I also really liked the style you used for Gerard's POV. I felt really bad for him though, 'cause I know all too well how terrifying it is starting a new school. I thought you captured that really well, by the way, with Gerard- the night before too. And oh god, this: 'a child ballerina on my sketchbook stage'...Duuuude, that's so brilliant!
Anyway, I'll stop rambling now...thanks for this chapter- I'm so glad Frank and Gerard hung out, and how it was all tentative and shy- how it actually is, y'know? Sorry, I'm going on a bit!... I can't wait to read more :D
CosmicZombie xo