I've read a lot of fanfics, and after a while they do seem to start blending into each other.
This story reads well, and has managed to take a fairly popular scene and do some new things with it. If you can keep this up then you'll have an excellent story. Well done & thanks for writing!
Brian
Author's response
Thank you! I'm glad you like it so far. I hadn't seen something like this happen before, so I'm glad to produce something new on such a popular scene. =)