Review for "You'll never fit in much, kid."

"You'll never fit in much, kid."

(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-05-01

Eh, Bee's point of view would be fine. Certainly interesting, that's for sure... But if she's going to see Gerard it might help to have his POV too? I unno, I confuse myself.
You know what Frank's situation is like? If You Could Only See by Tonic. I mean, he's in love with Gerard, though he doesn't even want to admit it to himself. Hmm, I'm guessing wrong song; too early in fiction.
Good Lord, though, you would think Frank would have reacted just a little less than way too panicky. I mean, true, he was just kissed by Gerard, but that does not mean you pull away, scared shocked, and run off without saying anything. Well... Damn. The more I think about it, the more I think he reacted just as anyone else would in that situation. I mean, he reacted like how I would probably... Err, no... Arugh, this is confusing. Okay, okay, I give. You confused me with Frank's reaction. I guess I'm pulling to Gerard's POV for the next chapter.

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