Hmm... is her name still Malfoy? Not Black...?
Great story. Great plot. Great writing style. OK, chapters are a bit shortly ;)
Sorry, but Gabby 14 years old and Harry 16 don't really work. All sources -partly official- I have read, say, that Gabby is 6 years younger than Harry. E.g.: »...born in the year 1986...«; »...turns 11 in the summer of '97...« (concerning the Beauxbatons-letter)
If I understood your timeline right, we are in the summer before Harry's "7th year" - where he should turn 17 in july!?
Well, I'm far away from being a nerd, but if a 512-bit-encryption takes a million years then should a 1024-bit-encryption take "a bit" more time -g-
I'm looking forward for every new chapter!
"Mischief managed"
AKOM
PS: Sorry for grammar etc. - English is my 2nd foreign language.