Review for Black, Gray and White

Black, Gray and White

(#) siledubhghlase 2009-05-19

Ragnok, you bad boy...

Never slap the asses of women standing over cauldrons. The situation can become...explosive. So much for their perfect potion.

At least Gabby put some good locks on her USB stick. However, if Hermione doesn't retrieve it soon, they might crack that 1024 code. If it were up to me, though, Bellatrix and Violette could have a cat fight to the death.

Narcissa looks as though she'd been either royally worked over or she escaped from someone. I hope she's on the up and up, because you don't want to piss off highly-trained Unspeakable War Mages.

Good chapter!

Author's response

LOL explosive situation indeed.

Bellatrix and Violette cat fight... they kind of did already on chapter 12, but I'm thinking of a different kind of cat fight...hmmm lemme see about that.