- I never get to rate your stories... even when I start reading the story that hasn't maxed in the ratings, it has by the time I finish...
- Excellent chapter (BTW Molly's family were the Prewett's)
- Bumping into Dung was... convenient, and it was a pleasure to find Goblins that were so... Self servingly cooperative.
- I don't think I've ever seen a Neville/Pansy relationship outside of Neville's abuse of the Slytherin in a Harry/Susan fic that I can't recall the name of just now. The formal discussion between the presumptive 'ladies' was quite entertaining.
- Luna as Lady Black was intriguing. At one point in Acts of Betrayal I was going to use Luna in the Daphne role, but couldn't see her being serious enough for it. You've seen her in a way I've never imagined. Very nice indeed.
- Peter was oddly cooperative as well. I've never been all that clear on the meaning of owing a life debt, but your version seems to have some teeth to them...
- It sounds like Tommy is going to find himself living in interesting times. Looking forward to what you've got coming.
Author's response
I find much the same thing reading your stories, by the time I finish a chapter its already maxed out. This is not a bad thing.
Thanx for the heads up on Molly's maiden name, I did fix it in the edit.
True, bumping into Dung was convenient but then again, a very similar hapenstance occured in HBP, if I remember correctly. The difference here is Luna was on hand to hex the miscreant before he apparated away.
Go Luna, go Luna, go Luna!
The concept of Pansy as a strong, caring woman is borrowed heavily from White Knight, Grey Queen. If you haven't read it, it's a good'un.
About the life debt, in my opinion, if you owe someone a life debt then your life is literally in their hands.
Tommy may think he knows what's coming, but he's never come up against the combined might of Harmony raised to the power of Luna.
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