Hey remember reading the first chapter when it came out and thinking this has possiblities...but kinda forgot or something else all the other chapters until today when I reread the entire story, which by the way I think is one hell of a story but when hermione and luna were rubbing themselves on harry's leg I figured they would of removed thier knickers, lot less messier that way and even more funner too! also I figure that hermione would of given harry a blowjob instead of what she did do!
Author's response
Hmmm, you have a point. But Harry’s first oral experience will be a bit further down the road – what I was after here was a different take on sweaty snugglebunnies, hence the rubbing off in knickers.
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