Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) whatareyouevensaying 2009-04-22

I feel sorry for canon Lavender as well...I mean, she loves RON! Need I say more?

At any rate, while a little fluffy for my tastes in a couple of areas, I enjoyed this chapter immensely. It's nice to see the beginnings of Neville/Pansy, since that's a far from common pairing.

Looking forward to more.

Author's response

Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing.
Did I not post a warning, "Fluffy snugglebunnies ensue"?
If not, I apologize for my lack of proper reader prep.
But, c'mon. You've read my stuff. I'm a fluffy kind of guy.
Just skim over the parts that are excessively endearing and it's not to hard to take. . .
N!