Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) LabRat 2009-04-15

I wonder, is it wrong to be in love with someone that technically doesn't exist? Luna, I think, makes the HP series worth reading.

Author's response

Luna not real?
She is so petit that, when we embrace, her cheek presses my breastbone.
Her sandy blonde hair is fine and soft so that the hint of a breeze blows it into my face.
I don’t mind, because each strand carries the scent of the apricot shampoo she favors.
When she looks at me with those pale, blue eyes I simply melt.
She slips under my arm with ease and holds my large calloused paw in her soft tiny hand and I promise that no one will ever hurt my Moon Child while there is breath in my body.
She is so easy to love.
I can’t help it.
I only hope that, someday, your Luna becomes as real to you.
Good luck.
N!