The last line definitely made the chapter...well done.
Draco being that evil was definitely a departure from canon, but it was one that I thoroughly enjoyed. Can't wait to see him suffer later on.
Looking forward to more.
Author's response
Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing.
I wrestled with the idea of 'reforming and rescuing' Draco, but decided to show him as irredeemable.
Some people don't want to be saved.
N!