Review for Achieving Clarity

Achieving Clarity

(#) DarQuing 2009-04-07

I really enjoyed this chapter. Some might say its a bit early for the 'I love you', but Luna seems to be one of the few people who know what they want and Hermione's known Harry since they got on the train. Hopefully, the three of them can find a way to help Draco out of his situation. A friend pointed out to me that he's not really a bad person, he's just been thrust into a bad situation. He has a generally bad attitude, but that doesn't make him a bad person. I think I'd consider him an anti-villain (yes, its an actual word).

Bit of a long review, isn't it? :)

Please update soon! :)

Author's response

Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing.
I agree, it’s early for the ‘I love you’ card, but, as you say, Hermione and Harry have been closer than lovers for most of the six years they’ve known each other. Luna, on the other hand, sees infinite possibilities, and in most of them, she comes to love Harry more than anyone.
I have written a few stories in which Draco is redeemable, but not this one. He crossed the line when he took the dark mark, and there will be no help for him. Sorry.
Hope you still stick with the story to its conclusion.
N!