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I don't have any complaints about the admission of feelings but the oath was a bit over the top for me. At least you kept away (rather pointedly) from the cliche "lights, bells and whistles", and for that I thank you.
Author's response
Thanx for reading and reviewing.
Canon readers will know that the cute little girls are Crabbe and Goyle enjoying adventures in polyjuice.
And you've hit on a point that not many people seemed to have caught, at no point did our trio make an oath, they admitted their feeling for each other, and declared their intentions to court.
Nice catch there.
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