Review for My Melody: Isshou o Sora
My Melody: Isshou o Sora
(#) shiiki 2008-07-28 09:47:16 PM
This is lovely! I thought you captured both characters well. The structure of the fic was suitable too. The only little niggling thing was the overusage of in-text Japanese translation, which got a little distracting. However, some of it did add to the feel of authencity of the fic. :)
Author's response
thank you! maybe i would have time to fix it someday to make it less distracting, but thank you! glad you liked it :)
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