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• Darla's Childe

  (#) jocaa 2008-08-16

  This was a little too dark for me so I did not finish reading it. Also Xander is my favorite character and I just find it hard to read about him being so evil and violent. I know that really limits the story possibilities, but what I read seems to be well written and easy to read -- there is a nice flow to it. Some writers make things kind of choppy -- makes it hard to get into the story.
  
  Anyway-- I really enjoy reading fanfiction and I admire those who have the talent and appreciate those who take the time to write for all of us to read.

• Darla's Childe

  (#) Jearom 2009-11-28

  Well I love this fix as I am not against turning good guys evil or at least dark as long as it is believable. I like that you expanded on an elemet from canon even if it was only used in one episode each of BtVS and Angel. Too often the dark Xander FICA come up with their own super-demon or vampire that makes no sense at all. Don't get me wrong, this is still a crack!fic, but it's high quality crack! If you like Evil Xander with a harem and lots if smut you should read this.
  
  By the way, I vote for killing Angel and turning Buffy, but make her subservient to Willow and Jesse. Or ufyou want to parallel canon, Buffy slays Jesse and hen gets turned and made a plaything as revenge.

  Author's response

  Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you are enjoying the stuff my Dark Id is providing.
  
  As for the Buffy Jesse idea, I'm afraid that won't work, because if Buffy tries to shove a stake in any of Xander's type of vamp, they are likely to pull it out of their chest and use it as a sex toy on her! GRIN
  
  Red

• Darla's Childe

  (#) horgoz 2010-04-23

  awesome and hot story.
  
  and i want a sequel ASAP.
  
  seriously, this is great. a bit more story into it though?
  
  nice of you to bring in amy and fred into the story, and i like your OC.
  
  some sugestions, get Angel to lose his soul or kill him outright, Angelus working for Xander here is a disaster waiting to happen, sunydale destroyed?? taking over all of California?? ah the things that can happen...
  
  turn buffy!!

  Author's response

  Thanks for your review, I didn't get a review alert, so I wasn't aware of it until tonight.
  
  I will be working on a sequel as soon as my muse permits. There will be more story and the sex won't be as detailed.
  
  I'm glad you like Jill, she is fun to write, and as for Angel, if you remember Xander's instruction to Darla, he is going to be a pile of dust in the near future.
  
  red

• Darla's Childe

  (#) semkirk 2010-08-20

  Great story. Lovely characterizations and hot scenes!

  Author's response

  Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. If you like Xander smut, have you checked out my newest story "The New Pack" It's on my profile, as well as on the Buffy Page. I am going to be re-posting it this weekend, because I just got it back from my beta.

• Darla's Childe

  (#) dangermix123 2010-10-08

  When's the sequel!! I enjoyed the story quite a lot and am hoping that you will find your muses soon!
  
  Keep up the interesting writing!

  Author's response

  The sequel will happen when it happens, it's not a problem of finding my muse, she showed up a few months back with an entire suitcase full of story ideas, and they are all fighting for my attention. If you haven't already checked out my newest stories in "The New Pack" series, I've posted one in August and one in September.
  
  Thanks for your review, and I'm glad you enjoyed my darker take on Xander

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