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• Black, Gray and White

  (#) dust101 2008-04-07

  I would like to recognize Lorddwar for his idea of Tonks' unspeakable name Chameleon and his amazing story of The Summer of Change, I think that's where i got the name. However, my plot is going to be totally different from his, although there might be some parallels since they will be Unspeakables

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) busted 2008-04-08

  I loved The Summer of Change definately one of my favourites. I am really enjoying your story too and I look forward to the next update. I haven't seen a fic with just Haryy Tonks and Fleur in it. It is interesting to see the way they work together with there different personalities.
  
  Keep up the great work.

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) Cateagle 2008-04-12

  You're clearly sinpired by Lorddwar's work but this is also clearly your own work with a different AU PoD (Point of Departure) and a distinctly different progression from there. As of chapter 7, you've not yet told us how/why Harry, Tonks, and Fleur came to depart after the third task but before the end of Harry's fourth year (ghod, that must have galled Dumbles) and that's an element of the backstory I'll most definitely be waiting for.
  
  I also have to agree with busted that I've not seen many, if any, stories with the Harry-Tonks-Fleur trio solely and as a fully intimate trio. I like it and the balance of personalities between the three of them makes for a very powerful team.

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) Garnth 2008-04-18

  Interesting settings.
  Some nice ideas and so far it looks everything will be used as part of story and not just to show of imagination.
  
  Can't wait for more.

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) tashriia 2008-04-20

  I like the pairing, and the story idea. The story seems to jump a bit, especially when you're giving background data, so the flow could be a little better. There are some spelling and grammatical errors, but they don't detract from the story. It is definitely an interesting read, however.

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) danster 2008-04-28

  I love how you have added some plausibility to Harrys new poweres/skills with the bonds and his traning masters. Many fanfics get quite cliched but you seam to have minimised that quite nicely.
  
  Can't wait for another update.

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) rusty32539 2009-03-09

  Glad to see you back!YAY! I hope for many more chapters of Fleur, Harry, Tonks asskicking action. (soon pleeeease!)P.S. Incase someone wanted to up the rating of the story go to http://www.ficwad.com/story/93950/rate
  Can't wait for another update.

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) issabissa 2009-05-22

  I just wanted to call your attention to a copy of this story posted on Hp Fanfic Archives. If it is indeed you under a different name then never mind, however nothing points to that. It defiantly the same exact story though. here is the link to the story:
  http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/viewstory.php?sid=292

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) ICBB 2009-05-23

  I love this story!! Can't wait for more!

• Black, Gray and White

  (#) koppe 2009-06-04

  Great story so far!
  
  Can't wait for what happens when they arrive at Hogwarts, and their relationship becomes common knowledge.
  
  I must admit I also wonder if Hermione will be there too. Did I detect a note of Hermione pining for Harry? Will that lead somewhere? How about Susan? Will she harbor feeling for him after being rescued?
  
  Bit perverted perhaps, but I do hope they'll accept Gabrielle into their fold eventually...
  
  Keep up the good work, and update soon.
  

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