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Heaven, Definitely

by lilrainforest 12 Reviews

Frank Iero has such strong feelings for fellow band member Gerard Way, but doubts he feels the same. (Frerard One-shot!)

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Warnings: [!] [X] [?] - Published: 2008/03/29 - Updated: 2008/03/29 - 1981 words - Complete

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  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) iRockSocks 2008-03-29 01:15:53 PM

    LMAO. :]

    shouldve included WAYYY more action.. ;]

    get what i'm saying? xD
  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) xSixteenxCandlesx 2008-03-29 01:43:01 PM

    I really like this one,
    you should write a sequel to it.
    :)
  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) crystalcrash 2008-03-29 02:14:15 PM

    Love it, and i favorited it.
    There's only one thing i though was strange though. In my opinion, having Gerard run off crying is a bit of an exageration. I mean, he could have simply pouted or looked sad, and Frank would have ran after him anyways.

    Great story though, i think it's really cute. And it's really well written, and important factor for me ;)

    < 333

    Author's response

    Awww thank you so much ^^

    Yeah I actually caught that during my editing last night... but that was at like 3 a.m. when I finished it up so I think I was half consious. (: I should go and change that now. slaps self Thank you!!

  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-03-29 02:21:42 PM

    Lmao!!!
    Omfg! That was so funny!
    Aww!
    And sweeeet!

    Loved it!
    Loved it, loved it, loved it!

    AJ Xx...

  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) geemelzzie 2008-03-29 02:47:45 PM

    HAHAHAHA, NICE, PAUL.
    Cute. :)
    And thanks for the credit, haha. xD

    /Payyyyce./
    Melzzie

    Author's response

    lmfao. i should really really put all those pointless horribly written collaborations on here and see what people think. maybe they are actually okay ya know? 0 self esteem much? xDD

    lol
  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) XxlovefrankieroxX 2008-03-29 03:03:14 PM

    Oh my god! Kissing toro!? That was just too funny xD I loved it, well written and soo cute :] Dont tell yourself its not very good, because it was brilliant :]]
    xox
  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) alice93 2008-03-29 04:43:22 PM

    HAHA!
    He kissed Ray Torro!
    LMAO!

    Ah, I loved this. It was soo sweet!
    I also loved the fact Mikey was drinking coke zero!

    Good job!

    Alice
  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-03-30 12:30:27 AM

    N'awwww, that was cute! You did a really good job on this, I think. I especially liked the part with Frankie kissing Ray, LOL, that was completely made of win. CUTE CUTE CUTE ending, so fluffy~! Made me want to squeeze 'em to bits XD

    Lol, good job, hon.:]

    Kendra
  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) Beatrix16 2008-03-30 12:12:13 PM

    Good story I really enjoy reading you stories. Your writting is amazzing
    Love the Kiss of Frank and Ray!
  • Heaven, Definitely

    (#) geemelzzie 2008-04-01 11:51:49 PM

    Hahaha, everyone loved the Frank/Toro bit. :)

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