Categories > Celebrities > My Chemical Romance
Heaven, Definitely
12 ReviewsFrank Iero has such strong feelings for fellow band member Gerard Way, but doubts he feels the same. (Frerard One-shot!)
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Heaven, Definitely
(#) iRockSocks 2008-03-29 01:15:53 PM
LMAO. :]
shouldve included WAYYY more action.. ;]
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(#) xSixteenxCandlesx 2008-03-29 01:43:01 PM
I really like this one,
you should write a sequel to it.
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(#) crystalcrash 2008-03-29 02:14:15 PM
Love it, and i favorited it.
There's only one thing i though was strange though. In my opinion, having Gerard run off crying is a bit of an exageration. I mean, he could have simply pouted or looked sad, and Frank would have ran after him anyways.
Great story though, i think it's really cute. And it's really well written, and important factor for me ;)
< 333Author's response
Awww thank you so much ^^
Yeah I actually caught that during my editing last night... but that was at like 3 a.m. when I finished it up so I think I was half consious. (: I should go and change that now. slaps self Thank you!!
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(#) AshamedToRiseAndBe 2008-03-29 02:21:42 PM
Lmao!!!
Omfg! That was so funny!
Aww!
And sweeeet!
Loved it!
Loved it, loved it, loved it!
AJ Xx...
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(#) geemelzzie 2008-03-29 02:47:45 PM
HAHAHAHA, NICE, PAUL.
Cute. :)
And thanks for the credit, haha. xD
/Payyyyce./
MelzzieAuthor's response
lmfao. i should really really put all those pointless horribly written collaborations on here and see what people think. maybe they are actually okay ya know? 0 self esteem much? xDD
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(#) XxlovefrankieroxX 2008-03-29 03:03:14 PM
Oh my god! Kissing toro!? That was just too funny xD I loved it, well written and soo cute :] Dont tell yourself its not very good, because it was brilliant :]]
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(#) alice93 2008-03-29 04:43:22 PM
HAHA!
He kissed Ray Torro!
LMAO!
Ah, I loved this. It was soo sweet!
I also loved the fact Mikey was drinking coke zero!
Good job!
Alice -
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(#) Lollipops_n_Gumdrops 2008-03-30 12:30:27 AM
N'awwww, that was cute! You did a really good job on this, I think. I especially liked the part with Frankie kissing Ray, LOL, that was completely made of win. CUTE CUTE CUTE ending, so fluffy~! Made me want to squeeze 'em to bits XD
Lol, good job, hon.:]
Kendra -
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(#) Beatrix16 2008-03-30 12:12:13 PM
Good story I really enjoy reading you stories. Your writting is amazzing
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(#) geemelzzie 2008-04-01 11:51:49 PM
Hahaha, everyone loved the Frank/Toro bit. :)