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Birthday Girl

Aurora always knew what tradgedy felt like, but she never knew how it felt to live a lie. She didn't even know her real last name. Will she give a new beginning a chance?

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Humor,Romance - Characters: Ray Toro - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/09/19 - Updated: 2008/03/03 - 1453 words

Reviews

• You Be The Murder , I'll Be The Scene

  (#) XxIceCreamHeadachexX 2007-09-21 01:25:34 PM

  Good. I like it.
  But, there might be a few things you need to change.
  First, you should always capitalize your sentences.
  And, it was a bit short. I think maybe a few more descritptions could be put in.
  Other than that, this story is great. It has a lot of potential.

• You Be The Murder , I'll Be The Scene

  (#) Firegoddess 2007-12-13 11:44:26 AM

  I like this story... Better than I like my own. lol. Mine were short at first, but once you get the hang of it, they should get longer. Keep up the good work.. I'll be expecting more.

  Author's response

  oh i know, i write constantly but i never have time to type it. lol.

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