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Say Goodbye
14 ReviewsAll that mattered to him was that he could say goodbye. Death didn't scare him...but dying alone did. Hospital one-shot. Frerard!
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Say Goodbye
(#) GerardWayisSex 2008-01-15 06:31:22 PM
Wow. That...so sad, man. I love how you didn't make it all cheery at the end. A nice twist.
And I have to say...Evanston?! Dude! I live RIGHT near there! Just north, actually! Rock, man. Nice choice. :D
~FinchAuthor's response
Thanks! :) I've read a lot of stories where one of them are in the hospital and the other one thinks they're gonna die, then they miraculously get better and they live happily ever after. There's nothing wrong with that, in fact I love those stories, I just think they're a bit cliche and predictable, so I made my own where that doesn't happen. I'm glad you like it! :D
Lol, Evanston was completely random! I found it on a map and decided it sounded cool! :)
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(#) sjoukJDB 2008-01-16 11:02:31 AM
neither, I think.
But good.
Yeah. I don't make any sense.
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Lol!! Thanks! :) -
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(#) x_Charlie_x 2008-01-16 12:38:00 PM
Fuck.
Sorry for the swearage but man, that was intense.
Probably made worse from the dream I had last night about my best friend dying in hospital.. but yeah...
really moving, well done =)Author's response
:/ I hate having dreams about people dying.
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(#) crystalcrash 2008-01-17 02:09:58 AM
Aww. That was so sad! At the end i was all "hold on a second more, Frankie!"
;_;Author's response
Lol, thanks! :) Wouldn't that just be so sad? :( If someone knew they were going to die and that their lover was gonna come through the door to say goodbye to them, but they died a few seconds too soon? :[
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(#) frankxgerard 2008-03-19 01:05:24 AM
God I love this.
It really freakin makes my heart hurt to think about, and that's awesome.
(and go me, I reviewed twice, here and on lj, so I deserve a cookie, lol)
I suck at oneshots, so I am officially jealous.Author's response
Aw, thanks!
HeRe'S yOuR cOoKiE!!!!1 gives cookie
Lol.
You shouldn't be jealous, you don't suck at one shots! I suck at any kind of writing at all :P -
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(#) Jess21 2008-05-04 02:29:10 AM
Damn you, sad endings!
No, not really it was amazingly awesome, except the end made me cry. You're really talented =]Author's response
Lol, I live to make people cry :P
Thank you very, very much! Reviews make me happy! =D -
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(#) live_life 2008-05-18 07:42:47 PM
oh my god, dat was so sad!!!! i actually think im crying!!! it was really good!Author's response
Aw, thank you! It really means a lot to me when people tell me that my writing has made them cry or nearly cry, it means that I must be doing something right! ^_^ -
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(#) Give-emHellKid 2008-07-28 05:52:49 PM
OMG!
that was amazing, nearly in tears, defo one of the best one shots i've ever read, OMG, i feel so upset now lol
kelly xxxAuthor's response
Wow, really? Thank you very much for your review!