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Dance, Dance!

FRERARD!!!! Dancing in clubs is always fun!!! :D Just something that flowed from my fingers. Nothing significant that will change someone's life, but I just wanted to write and post something l...

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: R - Genres: Romance - Characters: Frank Iero, Gerard Way - Published: 2007/06/23 - Updated: 2007/06/23 - 1233 words - Complete

Reviews

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) wtfwhore 2007-06-23 07:54:38 PM

  such a great story!

  Author's response

  Aw, thanks! :D Glad you enjoyed it!!!

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) mcr_lover103 2007-06-23 09:00:03 PM

  amazing story as usual!!! sweet and hot

  Author's response

  Thanks! I'm really happy that you say that cause 1. I don't think I'm that good of an author and 2. I was half asleep when I wrote this and I mean really, I can only remember part of it!!! Lol!

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) xSoMeOnEx 2007-06-23 09:04:03 PM

  loved it!
  really good.
  Frank and Gerard make such a sweet couple

  Author's response

  Thanks! I think tht Gerard and Frankie are adorable together, too!!!

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) littlestar451 2007-06-23 10:12:44 PM

  I like the end: 'You do realize that I'm sober?' mwah "So am I." Hehe :D Great stuff there :-) applause

  Author's response

  Thank you! I didn't know whether to post this or not! Glad you liked it!:)

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) sjoukJDB 2007-06-24 05:02:41 AM

  'So am I'
  
  aww, love it! frerard is so sweet! (especially when you wrote it)

  Author's response

  OMG, you are like, one of my favourite reviewers, and I know that I'm shit with favourites, but you really are!!! Thank you loads!!!

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) SafeFromRobotsDAMN 2007-06-24 06:39:11 AM

  aww, bless them to infinity! That was adorable :)

  Author's response

  Thank you!!! XxX I think that they're so cute together, too, and I dunno why, but I love writing about two guys kissing and stuff! =D

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) Nothingtosay 2008-01-28 02:20:48 PM

  Great story but why was Gerard puking if he wasn't drunk? Meh doesn't matter it's still a great story really sweet :)

  Author's response

  Lol, no, that was a sort of flashback thingie. Sorry, I should have made that clearer. Frank was musing on the night he knew for sure that he loved Gerard and stuff.
  
  "...a couple of years back, now, but I remember it so vividly after all, it's not easy to forget the time you know you're in love!
  
  I can't explain how I knew, but as he was hunched over the toilet, throwing up AROUND it (yeah, his head was practically dunked in the toilet water, yet he still managed to miss), his hair in front of his face, slicked down to it with sweat, I couldn't help but stare."
  
  Then it goes back to:
  
  "He's grinning at me now" like he's telling us as it's happening.
  
  I'm so glad you liked it!

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) MyChemicalSuicide 2008-05-30 03:02:18 PM

  Awww! That was so cute!
  Made me giggle and smile and I got butterflies in my stomach for Frank!!
  
  xox
  Emily
  :D

  Author's response

  Lol, thanks. I really appreciate your reviews and I'm glad to hear that you liked my other story enough to read more that I have written.
  
  I don't really think that my writing's good, so it's a realy confidence boost when people review! ^_^

• Dance, Dance!

  (#) figilio_vampiri 2008-11-21 12:52:53 AM

  Aw, nice short thing, I don't love it, but I do like it a lot.

  Author's response

  I think I've gotten better at writing now, cause I posted this quite a while ago. I like comparing my work and seeing how I've improved, it makes me feel proud :)
  
  Thank you for your review, it's very appreciated.

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