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That Smile

Everyone has their neurotic moments, Cloud more than some. Is this strange visitation a dream, an actual visit from her, or something he cooked up (yet again)? He doesn't know, and he doesn't care....

Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: PG - Genres: Fantasy, Humor, Romance - Characters: Aeris Gainsborough, Cloud Strife, Tifa Lockhart - Warnings: [!!] - Published: 2007/06/02 - Updated: 2007/06/02 - 2319 words - Complete

Reviews

• That Smile

  (#) Faeriegirl 2007-06-05 04:09:37 AM

  I'm not usually a great fan of Aerith, but that's because most people make her sickly sweet and saintly, which gets on my nerves :S But you kept in character without going overboard on the saintliness, so I liked this! To be honest, Aerith is probably the only one who could snap Cloud out of his misery, and you got that across well :)

• That Smile

  (#) doc 2007-06-18 05:04:40 PM

  I like this; it's bittersweet. You did a great job capturing Aeris' mannerisms and the peculiar feeling of a dream. I'm glad she gave Cloud a much needed reality check.

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