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The 'Abduction' of Hermione
When would be one of the worst points in time for an over-powered Harry to return to his past? During the Trial before the Wizengamot! Time-travelling rework Year 5. In this chapter, Harry plots...
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Re-Ordered
(#) c3markh 2006-10-25
Love the story as well as the other new one Triwizard ReDux. Thanks for writing I have enjoyed all the stories you have written.Re-Ordered
(#) jabarber69 2006-10-25
Hey great update, there romance is taking off, I hope he can get sirius and maybe remus over to potter manor for there own safetyRe-Ordered
(#) kellypassion 2006-10-25
I like what you did with the story. As soon as Monney and Padfoot are there with Harry it will get real interesting. Also what about the other girls what role do thet play in this story?Author's response
Well, the story IS NC-17. . . . that will take a few chapters for Hermione, more for Luna, and more for Padma. I still have decided if I should add Susan and Tracey. . . .
"T"Re-Ordered
(#) Nautilus 2006-10-25
nice, it well thought out and i like the character uses. I can see Molly and Ginny doin what they are (i don't like em). Dumbles is good. nice to see a realitic Sirius (both humorous and fearful for Harry's safty) congrats and update soon.
ps. i would like to see Susan, not sure about Tracy. But Susan yes. update soonRe-Ordered
(#) Skoell 2006-10-25
sry no more good stuff available for rating...
great chapter!
loved the end...typical freudian by hermione...=PRe-Ordered
(#) Jimm 2006-10-25
I thought you were going to finish Triwizard Redux first? Oh well. :-)
I'm surprised; I figured for sure that Luna would be the love interest in one or the other, knowing your past stories.
This is a good chapter, thanks for sharing it with us.Re-Ordered
(#) matthiasblack 2006-10-25
Another chapter from the good doctor. You really are spoiling me with an update a day on your stories but I don't mind. Keep up the good work and good luck on the next chapter.Re-Ordered
(#) BenRG 2006-10-25
Well, the "let's get our allies and dissapear" concept has now been used. That isn't necessarily a bad thing so long as you keep it realistic (Hermione is not allowed to advance to Ultra-Mage level in a few weeks). However, I'm sure that Harry can teach her a bit, especially if Legimancy can allow direct skill programming into the synapses.
You manage to get Ginny just right. I have always questioned Molly's motives in that area. If she just wanted Gin and Harry to be happy, she wouldn't need to resort to potions.
Anyway, I am looking forward to more.
BenRG's Rating: 7/10Author's response
No, no super powers for Hermione, just bigger boobs and a tighter tush. :-)
"T"
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