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The Timing Is Right
8 ReviewsToday is the day! Or is it? Jay tries to ask Theresa out, but there's too many interruptions! will he get around to it? I fixed it up so it's less retarded and all slashy and smushed into one...
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The Timing Is Right
(#) iheartyou07 2006-08-23 08:11:50 AM
I LOVED IT!! it was sooo cute, and hilarious, you've honestly got a great talent at writting!! loved the ending too, where Neil kind of walked in, keep on writting more stories please!!Author's response
awe, thnx, i'm glad you think i have a talent:D -
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(#) gucci84 2006-08-23 11:23:10 AM
I really liked this story! I can't think of anything that could make it better at the moment. So no worries, it's a good, cute, entertaining story. I loved the last paragraph. Stupid intteruptions eh.
-Gucci84Author's response
oh, i know what you mean, lol -
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(#) Loretta 2006-08-23 04:32:42 PM
Awww, this one was cute too. That was funny that everyone had bad timing. Keep up the good work. You are a very good writer! -
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(#) Amanda!!! 2006-08-27 06:38:03 PM
awww... i luved it it was so cute and sweet!!!i love j/t stories plz PLZ keep it up!!!!!! i hope you are doing another chappie!! you r right..... -
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(#) RainPaw 2006-09-10 04:40:30 PM
This is the one the only RainPaw and i would like to say what the hak is with all the slashs they drive me up the wall!
but besides that it was great, i don't usally read T/J ones only A/A ones but i desided to read this story and i see what i've been missing!Author's response
well, i feel really touched that you chose my story to read, and there's slashes? hm... -
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(#) puppy_palooza 2007-01-22 02:03:53 AM
cuteio muahahahaha coughs
as i was saying muahahahaha... oh just forget it, anyways good story :)