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Regret

Where Joey regrets a decision made by Marik in Battle City. Rated for language and some violence. AU.

Category: Yu-Gi-Oh! - Rating: R - Genres: Angst,Drama,Horror - Characters: Joey Wheeler,Marik Ishtar,Serenity Wheeler,Seto Kaiba,Yugi Mutou - Warnings: [!!] [V] [?] - Published: 2006/06/07 - Updated: 2008/08/03 - 1430 words - Complete

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• Regret

  (#) darkokita 2008-05-24 04:48:15 PM

  It was a little hard to read because of the tight line spacing, but the grammar and such were pretty good, thanks for that.
  
  As to the fic itself, WOW. I'm actually glad Serenity kept her bandages on (but how did she know to scream?) because I think it would have been better to remember him as he was than to have that as her last memory of him.

  Author's response

  I actually didn't notice that the formatting had turned out that way. I'll try to fix it. And maybe you should read through it a second time, concerning how Serenity knew to scream.

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