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Chapter 2
12 ReviewsFrank's not the only one dreaming...
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(#) lostmyfearoffalling 2009-07-02 06:44:49 PM
That was really great. I love the direction this one is going in. The symbolism is awesome, with the peach. And I loved when Frank was decoding Gerard's body language while he talked to the fan. I'm interested to see how the dreams bring them together. Can't wait for more! -
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(#) ladytwitch 2009-07-02 08:06:02 PM
I can see where everything fits in this story, and I love it. It's so descriptive, it's like I'm watching a movie. You have very symbolic dreams, my friend.
Amazing job. I'm ready for more! -
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(#) somethingorother 2009-07-02 08:13:22 PM
This is amazing! So pyschological and interpretive.
I'm so anxious to find out how everything plays out!
Ready for more! -
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(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-07-02 09:08:45 PM
I luff it! You're such a good writer. But now I'm thinking about what all MY dreams mean... -
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(#) xxASUKAxx 2009-07-03 07:57:57 AM
i looove this story so much :D
i cannot wait for the freaking update im so ezxcited
you're such an amazing writer.
please update sooon :]
xoxo Lottie oxox -
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(#) E-JayLovesGerard 2009-07-03 09:00:27 AM
just like Lottie above me, you are amazing.
cant wait for the next update. i'll be here waiting.
xox E -
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(#) IeroMyHero 2009-07-03 10:15:29 AM
Wow. You have some pretty deep dreams. I dream about two oranges getting married. Makes me feel sort of inferior.
Anyway, needless to say, you're an amazing writer and this story is just as amazing. I really like (so far) that it's Frerard, but like, it's not that cliche plot of them meeting in high school and Frank has an abusive dad and they fall in love when Gerard saves him.
It is a great change.
I can't wait to read the next chapter. -
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(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-07-03 02:14:26 PM
i fuckin love it!
i have an obsession with dreams anyway.
really great writing, keep it coming! thank you! -
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(#) kitkatpwl 2009-07-03 05:56:40 PM
Ok, I'm gonna be honest here, and I hope that you get where I'm going with it; I hope I can explain it properly...
This story is very weird, ya know? It's odd and sort of creepy in it's own way, and it's romantic and it makes my brain hurt and it makes me tired and it makes me smile.
I love it. I really do. It's only two chapters in and I'm completely hooked, maybe more so than any other you've written, and I think that says something because I've read them all and loved them all, but there's just something about this one...something about the descriptions that so greatly surpass the others and the emotions of the characters and the utter confusion that Gerard creates and Frank is feeling...it all feels surreal and yet completely real.
Favorite line:
He nodded, biting into the peach, his teeth piercing the skin and sinking through the juicy tenderness inside as it made delightfully squishy sounds against his mouth. Frank stared at the dribble of nectar that ran down Gerard’s chin, an escaped sweetness his mesmerizing lips could not hold.
Hello hot! haha
You said that you were tired of writing about sex, and I totally get that, and yet...
I love how it's so utterly sexual, Gerard, eating a peach, how entranced Frank is by the entire process, and yet, how he's still completely and utterly confused in the end.
Also, I can't tell, at the end there, if Frank was asleep or awake...did Gerard actually come down to his bunk to talk to him? To touch his sparrow tattoo, just to make sure it was still there? Maybe it's just me, but I couldn't tell the difference...I kinda like that...I think it takes the reader along a little bit more on Frank's journey...
Anyways, I'm done now. hehe
Can't wait for the next update!!!! Absolutely loving what you're doing!!!
Cheers
Kat