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Clanluna

Chapter 40: Clanluna Summer Gathering: at that time of the month

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Abraxas Clan of the Clanluna List

Deceased members:
Uba – Clan, mother of Creb, Brun and Iza
---Creb (37) – Clan, former Mog-Ur, 1st Weez-Ur (Roe Deer/Ursus totem),
---Iza (28) – Clan, Uba’s mother, adopted mother of Ayla
---Brun (36) – Clan, former leader, (Bison totem)
------Aba (38) Clan, Brun’s 2nd mate (ground squirrel totem)
------Ebra (41) – Clan, Brun’s mate, Broud’s mother
---------Broud (21) – Clan, former Leader, Ebra’s son (Wooly Rhinoceros totem)
----------- Oga (20) – Clan, Crug’s 2nd mate, Broud’s widow (hamster totem)
Dorv - Clan
---Iga – Clan, mother of Ebra and Uka, Dorv’s Mate
------Droog (34) – Clan, toolmaker, Aga’s mate, son of Iga Dorv’s mate
Borg (12) – Clan, Ona’s 1st mate, son of Ika (Boar/Ursus totem)
Zoug (43) – Clan, second in command to the leader before Brun (Ursus totem)
--- Grod (32) – Clan, son of the mate of Zoug, (Brown Bear totem)

Living Members:
Thonlan (17) – Other, Woodworker, Jondolar’s brother, 9th Ranked male Hunter (Cave Lion totem)
---Luna (24) – Other, Leader, 1st Weech, Creb’s widow, Thonlan’s mate, (Snorkack totem)
-------Zeen – (5) ½ Clan, son of Luna, Goov’s Acolyte, 2nd Weez-Ur (Ursus Totem)
-------Mara – (1) Other, Luna’s Daughter, Weech
---------Ansalong (13) - Owl
---------Winter Sleeper (4) – Cave Bear
------------Bop (1) – male Cave Bear
------------Honey Lover (0) female Cave Bear cub

Zar (24) ½ Clan, 1st Ranked male hunter, Goov’s Acolyte, Clanluna’s Acolyte, (Ursus Totem)
---Ayla (18) – Other, Clan’s 1st Ranked Medicine Woman, 2nd Weech, 2nd Ranked Woman-Who-Hunts, Zar’s Mate, (Cave Lion totem)
--------Durc (7) – ½ Clan, Ayla’s son, (Gray Wolf totem)
--------Iza (5) – ¼ Clan, Ayla’s daughter, 3rd Weech, training to become Woman-Who-Hunts (Unicorn Totem)
--------Mariza (1) Other, Ayla’s daughter, Weech

Vorn (17) – Clan, Uka’s son, 2nd Ranked male hunter (Smilodon)
---Uba (12) – Clan, Medicine Woman, Vorn’s mate, Iza’s daughter
------Uma (3) – Clan, Uba’s daughter
------Vuba (1) – ½ Clan, Uba’s daughter
---Brač (12) – Clan, Oga’s 1st ex-son, woman, Vorn’s 2nd mate (Bison totem)
---Uka (29) – Clan, Ebra’s sister, Grod’s widow, Vorn’s Mother

Goov (24) – Clan, Mog-Ur, 10th Ranked male hunter, (Aurochs totem/Ursus totem)
---Ovra (22) – Clan, Goov’s mate, (Beaver totem)
------Oogra (3) – Clan, Ovra’s daughter

Groog (29) – 1/8 Clan, 3rd Ranked male hunter (megaceros totem)
---Iga (25) - Other, (formerly: Andromedanaea of the Sungaea) 3rd Ranked Woman-Who-Hunts, red-foot, Clanluna (one-who-serves-the-Mother) Groog’s Mate
------Griga (3) – 1/16 Clan, Iga’s daughter
------Wilmar (1) – Other, Iga’s Son
---Igra (10) – Clan, Ika’s daughter, Groog’s 2nd mate, Brac’s former Mate,
------Brouda (1) ½ Clan, Igra’s Daughter.

Broog (23) – ½ Clan, 4th Ranked male hunter
---Ena (22) – ½ Clan, 4th Ranked Woman-Who-Hunts
------Boov (8) – ½ Clan son of Ena
------Brena (1) – ½ Clan daughter of Ena
------Ura (7) – ½ Clan, daughter of Oda, future mate of Durc?

Vorv (21) – ½ Clan, 5th Ranked male hunter
---Uva (19) – ½ Clan, mate of Vorv
------Broov (8) – ½ Clan son of Uva (looks full Clan)
------Ugra (7) – ½ Clan daughter of Uva (looks full Others) training to become Woman-Who-Hunts (Owl totem)
------Vorva (3) – ½ Clan daughter of Uva
------Zoug (1) – ¼ Clan son of Uva

Crug (26) – Clan, 7th Ranked male hunter (wolf totem)
---Ika (24) – Clan, Crug’s mate
------Crik (3) – Clan, Ika’s son
------Dorv (3) Clan, Oga’s 3rd son
------Corg (1) ½ Clan, Oga’s 4th Son

Groob (10) – Clan, Aga’s son, toolmaker, 8th Ranked male Hunter
---Eva (11) – ½ Clan daughter of Ena, Groob’s mate, 5th Ranked Woman-Who-Hunts

Grev (9) – Clan, Oga’s 2nd son, 11th Ranked male Hunter
---Aga (28) – Clan, Droog’s widow, Groob’s mother, Grev’s mate

Ranec (20) - Other, carver, M’buna’s son, 12th Ranked male Hunter, (formerly of the Mammutoi) (Snorkack totem)
---Ona (13) – Clan, Borg’s widow, Grev’s ex, Ranec’s mate (Owl totem)
------Bona (3) Clan, Ona’s daughter
------Orga (1) ½ Clan, Ona’s daughter

Bellapheron Clan of the Clanluna list

Ekwus (5) – Leader of the Centaur Herd
---Quicksilver- Unicorn, Ekwus’ Mate
------whisper (1) – Unicorn, Quicksilver’s filly
------ Phanthum (0) – Unicorn, Quicksilver’s filly
---Duskie (5)– Unicorn – Ekwus’ Mate
------ Miss Priss (1) – Unicorn, Duskie’s filly
------ Heather (0) – Unicorn, Duskie’s filly
---Sparkle (5)– Unicorn – Ekwus’ Mate
------Bangar (1) - Centaur, Sparkle’s colt
------Litestepper (0) – Unicorn, Sparkle’s Filly
---Silvertip (5) – Unicorn – Ekwus’ Mate
------Brackus (1) – Centaur, Silvertip’s colt
------ Tangle (0) – Centaur, Silvertip’s colt
---Nightwind (5) - Unicorn – Ekwus’ Mate
------Nether Light (1) - Unicorn Nightwind’s filly
------ Star-gazer (0) – Centaur, Nightwind’s colt

Dawn-Breaker (2) – Centaur, Duskie’s colt
---Midnight (2) – Unicorn, Nightwind’s filly, Dawn-breaker’s mate
---Starlight (2) – Unicorn, Silvertip’s filly, Dawn-breaker’s mate

Atturous (2) – Centaur, Sparkle’s colt
---Firelight (2) – Unicorn, Quicksilver’s filly, Atturous’ mate

Circe Clan of the Clanluna list

Androcles (4) – Androsphinx, Leader of the Sphrinx Pride
---Gynocles (4) – Gynosphinx, Andro’s Mate
------Aslancles (0) – Androsphinx, Gyno’s cub
------Heracles (0) – Gynosphinx, Gyno’s cub
------Leacles (0) - Gynosphinx, Gyno’s cub

“This Leader has decided,” signed Luna, as she stood up. “Brac, since you long so deeply for the days when we were Clan, this Weech shall grant your wish. From now on all the old rules of the Clan shall apply to you. Let’s see how much you like living the ancient Clan lifestyle . . . as a Woman!”

A pink ray shot out of Luna’s wand and Brac was transformed into a woman of the Clan!

“From this day forth, you will be known as: Brač,” signed Luna. “You will no longer be allowed to hunt! If you even touch a hunting weapon, you will be punished . . . severely! If any man wants to Relieve his Needs with you and gives you the Signal, you must comply like a Clan woman! You will do women’s tasks! Igra will have until the end of the Summer Gathering to pick a new mate. And unlike Clanluna women, you will not get to chose your mate. Instead, like a Clan woman, this Leader will assign your mate! Since you are responsible for his condition, this Leader assigns you to be the second woman of . . . Groog!”

Chapter 40: Clanluna Summer Gathering:

“What!?!” waved Iga. “But you can’t!”

Iga sprung forward and kneeled at Luna’s feet.

“Please Goddess don’t make this woman share a hearth with her!” begged Iga.

“You don’t want to share your hearth with a Clan woman?” asked Luna, incredulously.

“This woman doesn’t mind sharing her mate,” signed Iga. “In fact, Igra would be welcome to be the second woman at my Hearth. This woman just doesn’t want her mate, Groog, Sharing Pleasures with a woman who is not allowed to say, No!”

“Yes, Vorn,” said Luna, acknowledging that he had his hand raised.

“This man would be willing to take Brač as a second woman,” signed Vorn, with a vicious look in his eye. “This man remembers how Clan men used to treat women of the Clan and will treat Brač accordingly. In fact, since she thinks her mother’s mate was such a great man, this man will use his memories to guide him in treating Brač the way Broud treated Ayla when this man was a boy.”

Ayla visibly shuddered as she wondered it a Death Crurse would have been more merciful. Looking into Vorn’s eyes she could see Vorn’s anger at the way Brač had shown him to be a poor leader at the hunt.

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The meeting broke up and the women went to work on the rhino carcasses again. Uba directed Brač to help but when she saw how badly he was mangling the meat, she confined him to heavy lifting in assistance of other women, while they butchered and set the meat to drying.

In the evening, everyone was called back together for more ritual, first was the mating of Vorn and Brač, performed by Goov in the traditional Clan manner.

“The Spirit of the Smilodon has overcome the Spirit of the Bison!” signed Goov as he drew the symbol of Vorn’s totem over Brač’s.

Zar’s strong hands, forced Brač to sit at Vorn’s feet. Brač sat there, fuming the indignity of being turned into a woman of the Clan. It seemed like it took forever for Vorn to tap her on the shoulder! When he finally did, Brač looked up at her new mate with hatred in her eyes. That hatred intensified, when she saw the amused look in Vorn’s eyes! Vorn turned and walked to the teepee that had be set aside for their period of isolation. Brač reluctantly followed.

Inside, was a meal that Uba had already prepared for them. Brač was actually thankful. She didn’t have the memories for cooking. Once, she’d served him, Vorn ate his meal in silence, as did Brač. When he was done, Vorn thrust his bowl at Brač before giving her the Signal.

Brač blushed as she hesitated. She hadn’t thought any man would really want to Relieve his Needs with her. She still thought of herself as a man. Vorn cuffed her and pulled her to her knees. Brač struggled, but being turned into a woman had made her smaller and weaker than the man of the Clan. Vorn forced her head down and lifted her wrap. She was panicking as she felt the tip of Vorn’s organ brush against her gates. Brač struggled to get away but Vorn only beat her more. Brač cried out in pain as her mate entered her. When Luna had transfigured her, she’d been given an intact hymen. But Vorn had roughly broken it.

Vorn looked back to his memories of when he was a boy and tried to be as rough with Brač as Broud had been with Ayla, when he’d Relieved his Needs with her.

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After Vorn and his new 2nd mate entered the teepee, Iga the Clanluna stepped forward to make a few announcements.

“Amongst my first people, the Sungaea, Those-Who-Serve-the-Mother, are called the Sungaeae, and give up their names to take on the title, Sungaea,” began Iga. “Although each of the Sungaeae have certain things in common, they also each have their own specialty. This woman was about to take such a step when she joined this Clan. After conferring with Luna, this woman became our 1st Clanluna. Amongst the Clan, the roles that would be filled by the Sungaeae was sharpely divided with Healing being the Medicine Women’s role and spirits being the mog-ur’s role. At this time, after conferring with The Mog-Ur and Medicine Women, this Clanluna is formally recognizing The Mog-Ur as well as the Medicine Women, Ayla and Uba as clanlunae, At this time, The Clanluna would also like to induct her Acolyte, Zar into the ranks of the clanlunae. Just as the mog-ur and medicine woman fill different roles in the Clan, so each clanluna has different specialties. This Clanluna’s specialties are well known, Pleasures and Mushrooms. Zar’s specialties are 1st Rites and Hunting Magic. Unlike the Sungaeae, the Clanlunae honor not only the Great Mother, Luna, but also the Spirits of the totems.”

Luna blushed at this. She still hadn’t been able to convince Iga that she was not a Goddess. And Iga had spread that belief. Not just to her acolyte Zar, but to many of the members of Abraxas Clan, including her own Mate, Thonlan, whom she had brought back from the dead. And every single member of the other two Clans were members of the Luna cult. Luna was thankful that Ayla still recognized her humanity. Ever since she had given Ayla and Zar sex lessons, the Clan had begun evolving an intimate network, of sorts. Ayla and Zar had become regular lovers of hers. Though, actually, Zar was more “Friends with benefits”. Of all Luna’s lovers, the only ones she could really say she was actually, “in Love” with were Creb, Thonlan, and Ayla.

But Luna wasn’t the only one with regular lovers outside of their mates. For example, Brac had used Ona to Relieve his Needs before he was mated to Igra and even afterward, he used turned to Ona first, if Igra wasn’t available, up until he became Brač.

Luna realized that she her mind had wandered and she’d missed the public part of Zar’s ordination ceremony. Iga was now leading him to a teepee she was using that night for the portion of Zar’s initiation that only Clanlunae were privy to. Luna, of course, was allowed to enter that teepee during the night. But she decided to pass on that. She wasn’t comfortable with her cult in the first place, much less it’s secret rites. Instead, she invited Ayla to share the furs with her and Thonlan between tending the injured men. Ayla took her up on her offer.

During a quiet instant in their Pleasures, Luna heard Zar’s groan of release. This gave her SOME idea what was going on in the next tent. Ayla’s giggle vibrated Luna’s pink bits and Luna clamped down with her inner thighs on Ayla’s head as she went over the edge. Luna’s moan was stifled by Thonlan’s tongue caressing her own.

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The next morning, Iga was grinning all through breakfast, while Zar, just looked exhausted. After Breakfast, Ayla went hunting with Ekwus while Luna watched her children. Ayla loved the sensation of riding on the centaur’s back as he ran over the steppes. Eventually, they stopped playing and concentrated on hunting. Each of them brought back a megaceros to the Summer Gathering.

That night, the Women-Who-Hunt, along with Gynocles, the Sphinx held a women’s version of the Hunting dance.

The next morning they gathered together for their hunt. Luna was seated, gazing into her crystal ball, looking for game. Ayla was next to her also looking, but she was still learning divination. Eventually, when Iga, Ena and Eva had fed their families, Luna conjured a portkey out of her bow. The women and gynosphinx where whisked away to their usual hunting spot near the glacier.

Pulling out and enlarging her broom, Luna kicked off and fly into the air to scout ahead, while Ayla led the rest of the women-who-hunt, on foot to the mammoth herd. Ayla observed that Eva’s pregnancy was starting to show, although hers, Luna’s and Iga’s weren’t. They needed to get a lot of women’s hunts in before Eva got too big too go.

The addition of a gynosphinx did not disrupt their hunt. And when they returned to the Summer Gathering, there was a mammoth for each of them.

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The Clanluna Summer Gathering continued with more hunts, ceremonies and competitions. Luna had made a second chariot of an old tree, so they were able to have chariot races that were won by Ayla. In only took one try to realize that centaurs and sphinxes were too much faster to compete in foot races against the human members of the Claluna.

Ranec and Ona finally emerged from their seclusion, looking very happy with their union. A couple of days later, Vorn and Brać also ended their seclusion, looking less happy.

Groog and Vorv were recovering nicely from their injuries and showed signs that they would have a full recovery.

One morning, Broog, approached Zar, looking disheveled and harried.

“It’s time for a multi-day hunt!” proclaimed Broog.

As Zar came to realization and nodded, he chastised himself for forgetting what time of the month it was. Living in close quarters, the women’s cycles tended to synchronize. The long winter had added the last few holdouts. So now, all the women of Abraxas Clan went through their women’s curse at once. During warmer weather, the men would usually go on multiday hunts without the women during this time of the month. Winter didn’t offer this escape and this year’s long winter had been hellish! Perhaps Zar had forgotten because his on mate had been Blessed by Luna?

Zar shook himself out of his musings and rounded up the men for the hunt. To do the women’s work, they brought the older children with them.

Vorn was especially relieved to leave his mates behind. Although Uba’s women’s curses had not been too bad, (her suspected her Medicine Woman skills had something to do with that) Brač was having a particularly hard time with her first women’s curse. The way she was acting, you’d think a hyena was chewing off her arm!

Since all the men were anxious to escape, Zar led the men a day’s walk away and before even looking for game.

All along the way, Ekwus and the other centaur gave the men a good natured ribbing about the downside of having mates that don’t go into season.

“If your mates had a proper number of legs and horse heads, you wouldn’t be looking for an excuse to get away from them every month,” laughed Ekwus.

“Yeah, but you only get the Share Pleasures once a year,” teased Ranec.

“True, but my Unicorns make it worth the wait,” retorted Ekwus. “This centaur gets all the passion you get from your mate in a year, compressed into a few days!”

As usual for the Hunts that Zar led, they were successful. And without Brač, it went more smoothly, without anyone getting hurt.

When the men rejoined the Summer Gathering, the women’s curse time was over, much to their relief.

“You know, it doesn’t seem fair that the men get a vacation for us but we don’t get a vacation from them,” mused Luna. “Groog and Vorv are recovered enough to take care of themselves. Why don’t we make a little trip to the Beach?”

“The Beach? What is beach?” asked Ayla, as she worked on the mammoth hide she’d brought down and nursed Mariza, inside her wrap.

“You know, where the sea meets the shore,” clarified Luna.

“Oh, you want to go fishing?” replied Ayla.

“No, this woman doesn’t want to go fish,” complained Luna. “This woman wants to go have fun! Go Swimming! Lay in the Sun! Just us girls! What do you say?”

“That sounds like fun, but isn’t it far away?” asked Ayla.

“This Weech can make a portkey, once she’s been there,” explained Luna. “Watch Mara for me. This Weech is going to fly over there and scout it out so we can go tomorrow.”

Handing her youngest child to Ayla, Luna pulled her broom out of a fold of her wrap, enlarged it and flew off.

It was nearly nightfall by the time, Luna appeared with a:

Pop!

The next afternoon, Luna gathered the women together, had them all hang on to a rope, portkey and transported them off. Luna elected Brač to stay behind and take care of the men and children. (Though she had talked to Ugra about doing the real childcare for the youngest)

The women appeared on the shore of a beautiful blue sea. The shore was mostly flat rocks but there was a beach made up of round pebbles in front of them. Looking behind her, Ayla saw the deep darkness of a peak pine forrest, its’ shade prevented undergrowth except at the edges.

Luna enlarged and laid out a fur for each woman to lay on, then shed her wrap, before walking over to the placid sea and wading in.

“Come on in! The water’s warm!” waved Luna, neck deep in the crystal clear water. She could see fish swimming around at her feet.

The Clan women gazed at their leader in horror. Not one of them had any urge to go into water that deep. Ayla and Iga were not so, fearful. Shedding their wraps and dress, respectively, the two women of the Others followed their leader into the water. Seeing the women enjoy themselves, aroused curiosity in the Ena and Eva. The mother and daughter shed their wraps and tentatively explored the edge of the water. By the time the other three had finished swimming, Ena had been willing to go knee deep into the water and Eva was waist deep.

When Luna noticed the other women were standing around, looking for something to do, she was disappointed.

“This is our time to relax without having to take care of children or mates,” admonished Luna. “If you don’t want to swim, at least lay in the sun a little!”

When they saw, Luna lay, naked on her fur, the rest of the women obediently imitated her. Most of them felt very wicked, laying in the sun doing nothing.

They’d all been laying in the sun for a couple of hours, when they hear the crunching of the pebbles being walked upon. Ayla looked up to see a group of young men approaching with spears in their hands. Looking down, Ayla could see their Need growing. Luna was still snoring, haven fallen asleep. She motioned for Iga to join her and the two of them approached the men with hands held out for the universal sign of greeting.

The man reached for her head, grasped it and kissed each cheek. Before saying something in a language she couldn’t understand.

Although Ayla didn’t understand his language, she could see his need and she did know that men of the Others only kissed women they wanted to Share Pleasures with. Ayla knelt and presented. Seeing this, Uba directed the other men to follow suit.

“Ayla get up! You don’t have to Share Pleasures with every man that wants you!” signed Iga before the smiling man in front of her grabbed her wrists.

Seeing his companion, standing over Ayla and pulling down his leggings, he tried to wrestle Iga it the same position as Ayla.

When Ayla realized that Iga was didn’t want to Relieve her man’s Needs and he was trying to force her, reached for her wand, only to realize she’d left it on her fur!

Luna awoke to a strange man kissing her and trying to push her legs apart. Luna was so surprised that she flailed a bit as she returned to consciousness and in her flailing knocked her wand, out of reach!