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Corrosive

by hojo 2 Reviews

So what if Vincent was a little bit faster on the draw?

Category: Final Fantasy 7 - Rating: R - Genres: Horror - Characters: Hojo, Lucrecia, Vincent Valentine - Warnings: [?] [V] - Published: 2006/03/02 - Updated: 2006/03/02 - 2199 words

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  • Corrosive

    (#) Ithilwen 2006-03-05 09:56:27 AM

    "Callback" is one word.

    The transition from narration to dialogue is jarring and well-executed. It highlights the moment of the gunshot as a moment of change.

    I don't like the idea of Lucrecia as a faithless woman and Vincent's quips come off as very light for him but overall it's well-handled.
  • Corrosive

    (#) Ardwynna 2006-03-06 11:20:10 AM

    I completely envy the your bursting originality. Really, I have no idea how you make something so fresh and new and with so much singular style.

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